Tuesday, February 7, 2012


Jason Gravely
Story for January. 

To Whom It May Concern:

          I never imagined that this would be how it ended. People like to cling to greeting-card-ready affirmations like “It’s never over until it’s over” and “Tomorrow is another day”, but I’m afraid that “Our days are numbered” is the only clichéd phrase that really holds any weight. When they came for my family I was creeping around in the shadows trying to find us a potential way out, but that glimmer of hope came too late. Now I’m sitting in an empty freight car alone, listening to the steel rumble beneath me. I keep trying to drown out the screams that circle around my head like demonic apparitions calling out for my soul, but it hasn’t worked.
          I don’t know how they found us, but I have an idea that it had something to do with that stupid phone my sister, Collette never wanted to put down. She said I was just being paranoid and I wanted to believe her, but something kept telling me that I was right. Now I feel certain that we were being monitored. I always felt it suspicious that shiny, new technology was always made readily available, but the maintenance of our health and well-being was a crap-shoot. Even when basic necessities like food and clean water were becoming scarce, a brand new phone could be yours for almost nothing.
          In hindsight, I realize that it was entirely my fault that my family was taken away. I never should have used that stupid phone to search for like-minded individuals, but I had to try and find people who saw the change coming. I can only hope that you are one of those people. The last I checked, thousands of people were waking up and working towards change, now I can only hope that it isn’t too late for you.
          The only thing I have to keep the good memories alive is a single pearl that broke from my grandmother’s broach as they drug her away. Collette didn’t make it to their van. Ever defiant, she scratched and kicked at the goons in black enough to frustrate one so much that he shot her point-blank in the chest. Then the screams from my mother and grandmother intensified to a level that brings me chills every time I think of that moment. I saw all this from behind the bushes on top of a hill behind our house. If I had gotten back one minute sooner, you wouldn’t be reading this. I’m certain I’ll never get those images or sounds out of my head. Since that night, I’ve been on the run; hopping from one train to another wishing that I’d either find a way out of this country or out of this life.
          I’m not evil, in fact I don’t recall ever wishing harm upon anyone. However, in the eyes of the law, I’m the worst kind of criminal. I only tried to get people to become aware of the evil lurking behind closed doors. Incredibly powerful men who crave total control and the death of free will sent their goons out into the world to round-up anyone with an opposing view, but they never found me and I hope they never find you. From where I sit, my view is the fields, forests and freeways of this once great land, but all I see is the end. I once saw visions of this horrid change which has befallen us as a people; now I have visions of a Glock 9mm fixated on my forehead as I stare into the eyes of what used to be a man, but is now just a tool of destruction.
          I can almost smell death in the air around me when I roam the train-yards at night ducking between and under freight cars avoiding detection from the police on patrol. The streets at night used to glow with the headlights and store-fronts of bustling cities, but now it’s dark in every town I’ve seen. I don’t know what lie they tell people now, but before I started running, the news said that it was for our own safety. How can someone expect to be safe in a world where the enemies of humankind are in charge and the only comforting thought is that death is just a moment away?
          Every time I feel this pearl in my pocket, I think of how strong my grandmother was at her husband’s funeral. You could see the pain in her eyes, but her sorrow was outshone by her calm demeanor. When she was asked to speak at the wake, she only said: “This isn’t goodbye, Carl, I know I’ll see you later." I don’t know if she was right, but I know that you have to stay at least half as strong during these times. I don’t know what you can do to change what has happened, but I know you have to keep fighting until the bitter, inevitable end.
          When they finally gave up on the dog and pony show and told us that the new regime was for our own good. I swear I heard the cackle of a destructive beast. Maybe it was just death himself finding pleasure in an increased workload. You may remember when the news blamed all the suicides on drug-use, gambling debts and whatever else they could think of, but I knew it was just people who couldn’t bear to face the end of life as we once knew it.
           I’m writing this in the hope that someone will find it and at least know that they aren’t alone. I like to think that there is a group of people hiding somewhere planning the coup that we so desperately need. Maybe you will be the one to take the reigns and lead us in the right direction. Then again, maybe my words will be twisted and used as propaganda to further tighten the iron grasp of tyranny. Positive thinking was never my strongest attribute, but I’ve tried really hard to believe that things would work out.
          I hope that whoever you are, you’re fighting the good fight. I hope that you can go on for much longer than I did. I haven’t eaten in many days and I can feel my grip on reality loosening. I won’t let them take me alive and I don’t have the strength to outrun another cop and his dog. Please don’t think of me as a coward or a fool, I did the best I could and I just can’t go any further. I’m sure you’ve taken everything from my bag and out of my pockets, all I ask is that you cherish the pearl as much as I did. I hope that you can find happiness and accomplish what I couldn’t. Please take care of each other and never stop fighting those bastards
It seems not many of us made the deadline for last month. If you can send by the end of February, I'll still post it.

By the way, here is February's criteria:

Subject: Doubt
Setting: An Extravagant Manor
Object: A Rape Whistle

It's a bit odd, but good luck anyway.

Sunday, January 22, 2012

Introductions

This is the Story of the Month project. Every month, each of us has to write a story with the same subject, setting, and object. There is no real set goal, no objective. The stories are not graded, not judged. This is simply something fun that should help us all become better writers. Each of those that participate will receive the criteria for each month's story at the beginning of each month. Stories must be turned in by the last day of every month.

Here is the criteria for the month of January, 2012.

The subject is death.
The setting is on a train.
The object is a pearl.

Good luck.